Its a terrific day to bypass the world and languish what’s needing to be
Done are the days of silly cartoons dangling fake lives ‘front of me
I bend to the floor, escaping the lights, from the moon accessible through the blinds
My stonewashed jeans are clean and are dry and nothing weighs on my mind
The opalescence in this worldwide debut is the beauty of an angel’s halo
A zeitgeist of long gone serenity waits while dreams of a utopia grow.
Β©2022 CBialczak Poetry
- Eugi’s Weekly Prompt: https://amanpan.com/2022/06/28/eugis-weekly-prompt-opalescence-june-28-2022/
- Reena’s Exploration Challenge: https://reinventionsreena.wordpress.com/2022/06/30/reenas-xploration-challenge-237/
- 3TC: https://pensitivity101.wordpress.com/2022/06/30/three-things-challenge-m10/
- FOWC: https://fivedotoh.com/2022/06/30/fowc-with-fandango-terrific/
- DS: https://thedailyspur.wordpress.com/2022/06/29/accessible/
- WOTD: https://wordofthedaychallenge.wordpress.com/2022/06/30/worldwide/
- EM’s RWP: https://emkingston.wordpress.com/2022/06/30/e-m-s-rwp-204-stonewashed/
- MVB: https://chellebcom2.wordpress.com/2022/06/30/todays-prompt-dangling/
- RDP: https://ragtagcommunity.wordpress.com/2022/06/30/ragtag-daily-prompt-thursday-halo/
- YDWP: https://onedailyprompt.wordpress.com/2022/06/30/your-daily-word-prompt-Languish-ydwordprompt-June-30-2022/
Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
A peaceful feeling … By Christine Bialczak
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Thanks for the reblog!
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The last para is wonderful. Very well done!
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My waht a wonderful use of so many prompts Christine. Thanks for joining in π π
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Thank you!
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Hey guy I just finished the poetry marathon for 2022. When I get some rest. after the holiday this weekend. I’ll post some of my work. I look forward to the feedback.
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Hehehehe, I’m a girl!
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I love this poem. The imagery is uplifting. I wonder what kind of music would I flow with this classical or jazz!
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Difficult words but you gave them a softness which brightened them
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I like the word zeitgeist and how is was juxtaposed to the word angel. That’s real writing right there.
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Too true
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So positive and refreshing! It sounds like a day of peace π
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right?!?!?! I must have had positive vibes all around me.
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It was a beautiful vibe π
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Thanks Christine
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