Like a fractal deposit along the creek bed
an astounding accomplishment poignantly said
Sunset in a cup, so light and refreshing
Keeping all your close friends silently guessing
where have you been and where are you going
You’ll slip out the back with nobody knowing
The sound of a tin cup rattling with change
Time suddenly frozen, no need to arrange
A shipment sent back from an unlisted number
your hot mind relaxes and then you may slumber.
©2022 CBialczak Poetry
- https://thetwiglets.wordpress.com/2022/07/19/twiglet-288/
- https://amanpan.com/2022/07/19/eugis-weekly-prompt-astounding-july-19-2022/
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- https://pensitivity101.wordpress.com/2022/07/20/three-things-challenge-m30/
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awesome! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Christine, I love the idea of drinking sunshine in a cup. Your poem is impressive by the number of prompts you covered with it. I took the liberty of linking your poem in Mr. Linky so others can see it there. (I can unlink it if you want me to, but I think you want it linked?)
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Thank you for linking it! I often forget to check which prompts use Mr. Linky. I started doing the compilations and it has proven to be a fun challenge for me!
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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I love how you’ve interlaced the ideas, it works really well
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Thanks!
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Lovely poem.
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