When I look into the distance
When I look into the distance
I see you walking
with someone new
without me
smiling
laughing
When I look into the distance
I do not see us together
I am alone
without you
frowning
crying
When I look into the distance
my hopes for tomorrow
are as far away
as you are
©2020 CBialczak Poetry
Stine Writing 
Beautifully penned My Friend.
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[…] When I Look Into The Distance by Christine Bialczak […]
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This is beautifully written, Christine. Perfect for the prompt.
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Thank you!
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ohhh this is so sad.. looking at someone from a distance… you captured the man’s anxiety so well
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Thank you!
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Nice one 👍
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Thank you!
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You’ve captured the feelings on his face and pose so well Christine. Thanks for joining in the challenge
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Thanks Sadje
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You’re welcome 😉
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I am so close to trying one of these out, I just have major fear of ping backs right now. Dumb things are holding me back. I see so many I want to try, and I can’t get the ping back right. One day! I love reading all of them!
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Oh, you should try them anyhow! You can always just put your URL into the comments on the page of the host. You know when you hit publish and then there is a URL in a box? Copy and paste that into the comment section. That will work for most of them. Once you get used to pingbacks they are pretty easy. If you need help let me know and I will give you my description of how to do it!
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Hey thanks, Cee always has to correct mine. She is very nice about it. When I was in here years ago, I had them down. I don’t know how it changed so much. I love the six word stories too. I got try one on another blog. The author was like come all you WP people try one out. I found myself laying in bed that night thinking about all the different things that could have been said. It is great, I will give one a shot here soon. I appreciate your offer to help. I will see how I do. Have a great evening!
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Thanks and I hope to see you try Simply 6 Minutes that I host on Tuesdays.
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I will certainly try one, what the heck could it hurt. Looking forward to it! 🎊🎉🎈
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Nah, its all for fun…
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