What do you see?

When I look into the distance

When I look into the distance 
I see you walking 
with someone new 
without me 
smiling 
laughing 

When I look into the distance  
I do not see us together 
I am alone 
without you 
frowning 
crying 

When I look into the distance 
my hopes for tomorrow 
are as far away 
as you are 

©2020 CBialczak Poetry

15 thoughts on “What do you see?

  1. I am so close to trying one of these out, I just have major fear of ping backs right now. Dumb things are holding me back. I see so many I want to try, and I can’t get the ping back right. One day! I love reading all of them!

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    1. Oh, you should try them anyhow! You can always just put your URL into the comments on the page of the host. You know when you hit publish and then there is a URL in a box? Copy and paste that into the comment section. That will work for most of them. Once you get used to pingbacks they are pretty easy. If you need help let me know and I will give you my description of how to do it!

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      1. Hey thanks, Cee always has to correct mine. She is very nice about it. When I was in here years ago, I had them down. I don’t know how it changed so much. I love the six word stories too. I got try one on another blog. The author was like come all you WP people try one out. I found myself laying in bed that night thinking about all the different things that could have been said. It is great, I will give one a shot here soon. I appreciate your offer to help. I will see how I do. Have a great evening!

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