Written for Rochelle’s challenge: https://rochellewisoff.com/2020/08/19/21-august-2020/
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“Do you really think someone is in there?”
“My mom said an old lady lives there but said not to knock on the door because she can’t get out of bed anyhow.”
“How does your mom know?”
“I don’t know, she just told me. The lady’s name is Veva. Mom said that Veva was married and when her husband died, she put him in a freezer then went about her life.”
“Ew, that’s creepy. What if she asks you to come in and offers you an ice cream?”
“If she asks I’m going to tell her I’m allergic to milk.”
©2020 CBialczak Fiction
hehe! There is one house and one story like that in every childhood! We had Dr. Quick. His house was dark and gloomy and was at the end of a private drive that had a large metal gate that he had to open remotely. No one dared go past that gate and to my knowledge not a single kid was foolish enough to trick -or-treat at his home. (Rumor had it that he had murdered his wife and kids)
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Wow! I love stuff like that.
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And the freezer is labeled “Just Desserts” no doubt! 😉
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Bahahaha
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I would pass on the ice-cream. The story works very well with the prompt.
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Thank you
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Hope it remains a Fiction 😀 😀 😛 😛
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if you tell the kids not to it, he or she will definitely will. suspense awaits. 🙂
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Freezing was good enough for Walt Disney.
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He he…this reminded me of childhood and all horrible stories we’d come up with of things we had little information about. You captured the essence well😀
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Thank you
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LOL!.Fun post!
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Dear Christine,
I’d most definitely pass on the ice cream…and the house for that matter. Stories like that do perpetuate themselves. 😉 Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle
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So long as she only offers an ice cream and nothing worse happens to them!
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That sounds a lot like Miss Havisham… wonder if she has a moldy wedding cake as well
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Hahahaha
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It’s good to plan for every eventuality before knocking on the door of the creepy house 🙂
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that’s for sure
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