Written for Fandango: https://fivedotoh.com/2020/07/18/fowc-with-fandango-ambience/
One Day
The ambiance around was clear
There were no vagrants to be found
Soft sweet music filled the air
Flowers and beauty all abound.
Until one day he did arrive
That man from up the street
He smelled like smoke and alcohol
Or is that dirty feet?
©2020 CBialczak Poetry
Maybe dirty feet ??? Ha!
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kindof wrecks the ambiance!
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Eeew…dirty feet – blurgh. Great poem though 🙂
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Thanks. I don’t know why I turned a perfectly beautiful and peaceful poem to that but it came to my mind. Good for a chuckle! Thanks for reading.
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😀😀 It was great! And writing is good when it surprises the writer as well as the reader.
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Well that certainly took a bit of a twist! 😂
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right? I didn’t have that intention but then it just came out.
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