Fix: quadrille #104

For d’Verse Poets Pub: and De Jackson at

Maybe it’s me

If I thought about you  
And how I’d fix your ways  
I’d start with all my visions  
Of you these past few days.  
Were you even happy?  
Did you say some grace?  
Maybe it is me needs fixin’ 
Here around this cold, dark place. 

©2020 CBialczak Poetry


  1. kim881

    The situation portrayed in your quadrille is something that’s familiar to most of us, Christine. I like that it’s in the first person, directly addressing the ‘you’, but the reader feels as if they are the ‘you’! The rhyme and rhythm are very effective, like a mantra.


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