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Hidden
A shadow lurked in the hidden recess of the abandoned doorway. No one would see him here, nor would they think they had to look for anything. He had the city glued to his every movement, his every activity but they hadn’t been able to find any clues as to who this man was who was taking innocent women from their homes and leaving them for dead in the ruins.
What he didn’t foresee was what would become of his next victim. She was stronger than most and she would survive his torture, so that she could bring him in.
©2022 CBialczak Fiction
Stine Writing 
the man is acting like a at, collecting his victims and placing them to be found. At last one fought back, he will be caught. Plenty of tension and concern in your story.
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It was bound to happen. Good for her.
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Ooh, a serial killer meeting his end, nice one!
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Thanks!
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I’m glad he finally met his match.
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right?!?!
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Just when you think you have a plan coming together!
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And that survivor will bring him down. Good one!
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Thank you
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Intriguing! Can’t wait to read more….
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And that’s how they usually nab them, when one is tough and smart enough to survive their attack. Good story.
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Thanks!
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Good ending. Sad that she has to be tortured, but the monster’s reign of terror is over.
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Dear Christine,
Glad someone finally took him down.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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