As written here: It’s obvious that I am asking you to write a soliloquy, but I would like you to make an effort to include some clear examples of one or more poetic devices of your choosing in your self-talk
Oh, why did I think
I could taste the sun
to experience the lemon
sweet and sour
when the setting of the sun
takes out the heat
and leaves me hearing the tic tic
as the sun slips below the horizon?
©2021 CBialczak Poetry
Stine Writing 
Christine, this is a superb example of synesthesia…you give me a new insight into sun/sets. Lovely.
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Wow, thank you Victoria!
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Every sweetness has its bitter side! Well said 🙂
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Thank you Ingrid!
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Cheers! This is a really neat stream of consciousness soliloquy.
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Thank you Helen!
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