Words: hug, face, restrict, home, times, cult, distance, count, woke, look, call, hands
Held Captive
When I woke, I saw the face of my captor. I don’t know why he took me from my home. I don’t even know the distance I traveled to be counted as part of this cult, but I know the restrictions now imposed upon me were serious. I knew I could not call home, my hands were tied, as I realized the times were changing quickly. I would no longer look into the eyes of my loving mother or feel the tight hug from my father. I was now part of a group who had tight boundaries and was going to have to learn to follow them or face consequences unknown to someone like me, a girl from a small town in Oklahoma.
©2020 CBialczak
Written for The Sunday Whirl : https://sundaywhirl.wordpress.com/
Love the direction you took.
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Thank you. A friend of my mothers years ago had a daughter that married a guy in a cult. It was pretty scary.
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I bet it was.
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kaykuala
That rare occasion when one gets entangled in a web of deceit. Great story line for a mystery thriller, Christine!
Hank
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Thank you. I was actually thinking of a situation when I was younger that my mother’s best friend’s daughter married into a cult, and not a good one! She gave all her money to them and the restrictions were ridiculous. No skin showing, no doing anything but staying home if you were a woman…I don’t remember it all but it was scary.
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Wow. Loved it. The juxtaposition of emotions beautifully expressed
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Well thank you…I will have to check online to remember what juxtaposition is but I bet it’s something good…Lol!
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Lol. Let me know after checking if it makes chance 😊
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Okay, yes, it makes sense. I think the viewpoint that she is now in a bad situation but has a grasp on the good relationships…I have to laugh…I’m not shy about saying my vocabulary is not as wide as I would like…I work on that all the time. Thanks for commenting!
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We all work on our vocabulary. I am
Sure, I will learn a lot from you as well 😊
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