It is great collaborating with other writers!
Poetry Partners #124
A poem by Christine Bialczak of ‘Stine Writing and Miniatures’
Memories slow
after the sadness subsides
but pick up pace
while time passes by
Creating
an ebb and flow
of grief
of sadness
of happiness
of love
Memories keep
time moving forward.
- Stine Writing and Miniatures: https://christinebialczak.com/
A Waltz Wave by ben Alexander of ‘The Skeptic’s Kaddish’
time
passes
by;
fluid
impressions
ebb &
flow;
we shall
never form
fresh memories
of the dead;
their ti-
ni-
est rip-
ples across
heartstrings
make
us trem-
ble
I like and understand these poems!
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❤ ❤ ❤
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I loved your poem Christine and David’s play on yours!
💖👏👏👏👏
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Yes, he did a great job!
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As did you!💕
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What a brilliant poem Christine! I enjoyed it and it really spoke to my heart! ❤
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Thank you
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I love both of these poems. So thoughtful and well crafted. David is such an amazing collaboration partner, isn’t he? His Poetry Partners initiative has produced some amazing collaborations, including this one. Well done to both of you. 🙂
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Thank you!
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What a combo. Love it
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Love these 💕
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