Weekend Writing Prompt #420 – Fizzle

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Paula waited for the red Volvo to drive up. She had not met Jake, but he did tell her he would pick her up in his new car. Usually, Paula would meet the blind date at the pub but  Michael knew him so she felt safe being picked up. Her feelings fizzled when he pulled up in a beat up Ford Ranger.

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  1. Oh dear, not the best start! Hubby drove a Lada, and I insulted it with my first sentence ‘So that heap’s yours is it?’ OMG. not exactly a brilliant opening for friendship, but he didn’t take offence!

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