
Anupama’s prompt guidelines
- Challenge:Reimagine emotions as objects;
- What if feelings took shape? Anger could be a blade, sharp and biting. Loneliness might be an echo in an empty room;
- Poetic form: Any;
- Length: No more than 12 lines.
Ooey, gooey baby
The rubber soft edge of the giggle was heard
Through the walls like the page of a book
Floppy and melty no time now for hard
Was all I could see when I first took a look
The ooze it was gooey and melted away
Down the chin of the sweet little boy
The goo it was oozy and just wouldn’t stay
As he sat still and played with his toy.
But soft as it was the crisp edge came in
With his mom who looked tired and frail
She didn’t need a new nappy or pretty clean bib
Her sharp tone like a plastic sand bucket pail
©2025 CBialczak

hi, Christine 😀
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Lesley Scoble, is now live:
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
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I might still try to get to this this week!
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for sure! you’ve got another 14+ hours ❤
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I wasn’t expecting that last line at all!
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😂
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Christine, the softness of the child’s giggle contrasts beautifully with the harshness of the mother’s tone, making for a powerful narrative ❤
Much love,
David
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Last line was perfect! It spoke volumes.
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Voices can be soft or sharp – delightful weaving of the gooey giggle with the hard edge on mother’s annoyance!
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Oh, but don’t we wish we had…a few….of those days again! 😂
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Yes. Selective memory makes then very attractive!!
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i think we can all identify with the sharp tone of a mother’s displeasure! This was wonderfully made.
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Thank you. I think when I wrote about it I was thinking of all those pictures I see, my cousin and his baby, my former student and hers!
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Very nice
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mama’s rebuke can put the fear of the almighty in you.
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ain’t that the truth! 🤣
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😆
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Beautifully written
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Thank you
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You’re very welcome
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