
Paulo Coelho on X: “Promises mean everything, but after they are broken, sorry means nothing” / X.Sep 27, 2017
Promise to my daughter
Back in the day before you were born
I promised you things I’ll never regret
I said I would love you whatever you do
I could never stay mad, sad or upsetTo this day
I proudly say
I love you
in every way
©2024 CBialczak

Such a heartwarming poem, Christine. And that’s a beautiful quote by Paulo Coelho
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He is one of my favorite authors!
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Mine too!
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Yes sums up the parental love and responsibility bond.
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Nice rhythm and rhymes. Well done.
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Thank you
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❤
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This is a beautiful message to your daughter. And I really hope she reads this.
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Love the direction you took this in. Wonderful!
Pat
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Christine, this poem beautifully captures the unconditional love between a parent and child—it’s so heartfelt and genuine, and it really warms my heart!
~David
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A wonderful statement of unconditional love between a mother and her daughter. Am right there with you on this one!
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Lovely, Christine – this is a promise that every parent should make to their children…
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Lovely! Your daughter will love reading it over and over ☺️💕
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I hope so!
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Loveliness flows from every line, Christine ….
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This sounds perfect… I am glad you have a good daughter
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Beautifully written. I am sure your daughter appreciates your love and care in her life!
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Nice post 🌺🌺
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Daughters need to see in their father’s the love that will keep them secure into all their other relationships. It is foundational
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My daughter and my late husband, her dad, were best friends. It was and still is so hard that she doesn’t have him.
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I remember my own sister’s loss when my father passed. Those first years were so hard to live through.
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Yeah and we got hit twice when I lost my son 13 months later
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I am so sorry for this.
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Thank you
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Love your poem Christine 😊👏🏼
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Thank you Sadje!
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You’re welcome ☺️
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Christine this is a wonderful love letter (poem) to your daughter! I hope you write it out and give it to her!
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To be honest, I am hoping she sees it. One night about a month ago or so she called me late, probably around 1 am, because her boyfriend was being a cruel ass, as usual. Anyhow, she asked me if me and her dad had ever cheated on each other. I was so surprised and I told her absolutely not, we were both faithful despite arguments and whatnot. She said that once she read one of my poems and it “sounded like you were writing that dad cheated on you”. I couldn’t believe it and she said that she had been afraid to ask me about it but has had that worry for a long time. I don’t know what she read but I told her that was NOT my intention and she felt better. Long story short, I am hoping she reads this one!
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Yikes! That’s why when my mother was alive I always had to put a disclaimer on posts so she wouldn’t jump to the wrong conclusion! I wouldn’t leave this one to chance! It would be a lovely gift at Christmas!
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Great idea
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