Sally’s prompt guidelines
- Thematic (required): Travel;
- Where would you like to go? What your favorite place you’ve been? Or, put into poetry some experience you’ve had while traveling!
- Form (required): Cethramtu rannaigechta moire;
- At least three stanzas.
Cethramtu rannaigechta moire?
The “cethramtu rannaigechta moire” poetic form has two fundamental requirements:
- Syllabic:
- Each verse has four lines;
- Each line has three syllables;
- Rhyming: The 2nd and 4th lines of each stanza rhyme;
- Any number of verses.
When writing this poem I thought about how when I travel I love to see how people live and the world they live in. Some people want all the amenities but I want real-life culture.
Share your world
Brand new land
Much to see
White hot sand
New to me
Share your life
What you’ve got
Show no strife
It’s a lot
Overseas
Here on land
Hear my pleas
Take my hand
Eat your food
Share your space
Bad or good
Not a race
Proud of all
Its all new
Large or small
Life is true
©2024 CBialczak

Your poem is wonderful, Christine 💕 an absolute delight to read 🌹
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Thank you!
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👌👍🌹
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I love this Christine, sharing space, and just a snippet of time in a little piece of life of others, I hope travel gives us more understanding of others and building friendships along the way.
💞Suzanne
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Thank you!
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“Take my hand”–I love the open feeling in that line. (K)
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❤️
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Loved this one Christine! I can feel the vacation vibes!!
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Thank you! How was your trip by the way?
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this is awesome Christine! ❤
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Thank you
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A powerful message of sharing heart and home with each other, no matter who we are or what we look like.❤️
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exactly!
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Your imagery is so vivid, Christine… I think your concise expression in this piece does a great job of capturing the essence of exploration and unity!
❤
David
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Thank you!
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Christine,
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the wonderful Heather (Sgeoil) is now live!
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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Thank you David!
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Excellent poem Christine.
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