
Our W3 prompt
- Poetic form (required): Rondeau
- Theme (required): Freedom
Rondeau?
The rondeau is a syllabic construct of three verses: a quintet, quatrain, and sestet. The lines are of two distinct lengths: 1) the main length and 2) the refrain. The refrain is the first few words of the first line.
- Three stanzas: A quintet (five lines), a quatrain (four lines) and a sestet (six lines).
- The first half of the first line in the quintet is the refrain line. This refrain is used for lines 9 and 15.
- Rhyming:
- The quintet has a rhyme scheme of b-b-c-c-b.
- The quatrain has a rhyme scheme of b-b-c-A, where A is the refrain drawn from the first half of the first line of the poem.
- The sestet is rhymed b-b-c-c-b-A, where A is again the refrain line.
- The refrain line is usually 4 syllables or two verse feet.
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Life is Good
Free to believe what you think is true
Sometimes you’re open to something brand new
Open your eyes, open to see
All that is possible, all that can be
Hopeful that love will carry you through
As free as a bird in a sky so blue
Seeing the world above as it flew
Happy to land in a safe sturdy tree
Free to believe life is good
Moving along following the sky’s bright hue
Knowing that freedom can be gained by two
Letting each other feel open and free
Allowing the differences to agree
Starting each day with fresh morning dew
Free to believe life is good
©2024 CBialczak

Nce words, Christine! I loved your poem ❤
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“Knowing that freedom can be gained by two” – this line stands out so well! I love this and am going to keep it written down along my favourite quotes, Christine!
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“Free to believe life is good”
I feel free to think your rondeau is truly lovely, Christine 💕
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I love the positivity and the joy of freedom shared together, lovely 💞Suzanne
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Christine this is a lovely exploration of the sensation of freedom we all hope to find – either alone or shared with someone special!
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Very positive poetry Christine. Mood altering with positive affirmations. 🙏💜
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Lovely poem dedicated to freedom
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Christine, I simply love how you capture the essence of optimism and freedom in this piece 🙂
The imagery of a bird in a sky so blue and the hopeful spirit throughout make it truly uplifting!
~David
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Christine,
This week’s W3, hosted by the lovely JM Negi, is now live 🥳
Enjoy!
~David
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Ah, thank you for the reminder! I am working outside the house now so yesterday when I was home I was so busy catching up on all the things I used to do. I will be back to participate for sure!
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