
Poetic Dreams
Reading poetry wraps my mind
So much to find
Loving the world each written word
So absurd
I hope one day I’ll be a pro
I think I’ll know
Watching my experience grow
Practicing ’til my words flow free
Maybe in a book they might be
So much to find, so absurd, I think I’ll know
©2023 CBialczak
The first line of each couplet is 8 syllables long and presents a question to which the second line responds in 3 to 4 syllables–either as an answer or an echo.
The quatrain is also referred to as a redondilla (which is usually a quatrain written in trochaic tetrameter) with an abba rhyme pattern. The final line of the quatrain also combines lines 2, 4, and 6 together.
As such, here’s how the whole poem comes together (line-by-line):
Line 1: a rhyme in 8 syllables
Line 2: a rhyme in 3-4 syllables
Line 3: b rhyme in 8 syllables
Line 4: b rhyme in 3-4 syllables
Line 5: c rhyme in 8 syllables
Line 6: c rhyme in 3-4 syllables
Line 7: c rhyme in 8 syllables
Line 8: d rhyme in 8 syllables
Line 9: d rhyme in 8 syllables
Line 10: (Line 2) (Line 4) (Line 6)

Well done!! The shifting meter is so tricky and you nailed it!!
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You’re really going to give me a big head thinking I am doing all these forms so well!
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