
Spending Time With Dad
Remembering the days before
When things were not so hard to do
I’m smiling that you still adore
I really wish you still knew
But spending time with you is fun
Even when my thoughts might turn blue
“Cause long ago you were the one
I really wish you still knew
©2023 CBialczak
Since this was about my dad I used the same picture!
The kyrielle is a French four-line stanza form that has a refrain in the fourth line. Often, there is a rhyme scheme in the poem consisting of the following possibilities:
- aabb
- abab
- aaab
- abcb
The poem can be as long as you wish and as short as two stanzas (otherwise, the refrain is not really a refrain, is it?), and, as with many French forms, it is very nice for stretching your poetic muscles.
Also, tres importante! Your lines must contain 8 syllables. I’ve written an example below to show how this poem works (on a technical level).

The kyrielle is one of my favorite forms – and this poem is so poignant!
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Thank you! You amaze me! You know so much about poetry!
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