
*stanzaic, can be written in any number of quintains.
*syllabic, 6-6-5-6-6 syllables per line to imitate the rapid click of the heels of a dancer.
*Line 2 and Line 5 assonate. (same vowel sounds)
Feeling the vibes of life
Seeing the rays of sun
Love the warmth I feel
Greatful for things I have
Realize life opens up
©2023 CBialczak

this is a new form to me and I loved your poem Christine! ❤
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Thanks. It was new to me too and I don’t know that it is something I would do again unless it was suggested
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Beautiful in its simplicity.
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Thank you
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Beautiful work done! ❤️❤️
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Thank you
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So beautiful, Christine.
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Thank you
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How utterly I relate!
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Vibrant with life and so fitting to the form! So good, Christine!
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Thank you!
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I love the positivity of this poem Christine 🙌
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Thank you
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Such bеautiful words that rеsonatе dееply with thе еssеncе of lifе! 🌞 It’s in thosе momеnts whеn wе fееl thе warmth of thе sun and apprеciatе thе simplе blеssings that wе truly rеalizе how lifе opеns up to us. Gratitudе is thе kеy to еmbracing thе vibеs of lifе. Thе closing linе, “Rеalizе lifе opеns up,” is a hopеful rеmindеr that еmbracing lifе with an opеn hеart and mind can lеad to nеw opportunitiеs and еxpеriеncеs. Kееp sharing your wondеrful rеflеctions!” 🌻🌟 👍👌😊
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Thank you for reading and responding so nicely! I really appreciate it!
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Love the joy of dancing and living life!!!!
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❤️
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What a sweet, thankful little Flamenca. This made me smile… thank you for that. 🙂
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So beautifully written
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Thank you
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You’re welcome
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