
All of my loves…
It started out at a party, party hearty
It lasted a long time, sublime
I ended up in tears for years
We tried to get together again, but thenLife moved on, a new way to begin, a win
With a new love that was found, around
It lasted for many years, no tears
Until it ended badly, sadlyI tried it once more, to adore
But now I’m here, no fear
On my own, alone
Ready to begin anew, no longer blue
©2026 CBialczak
O’Nika’s prompt: Echo verse
This week, let’s play with rhyme and repetition by writing an echo poem about firsts.
What is an echo poem?
An echo poem repeats the ending syllable (or syllables) of each line. That’s it. No strict rules about meter or length.
You can do this in two simple ways:
- Option 1: Repeat the ending syllable(s) at the end of the same line.
- Option 2: Repeat the ending syllable(s) on a short line directly beneath it, like an echo.
For example:
Is there anything to know? No!
Is there anything at all? At all?
—or—
Is there anything to know?
No!
Is there anything at all?
At all?
Our W3 challenge
- Write an echo poem about a first — first love, first heartbreak, first bike ride, first apartment, first snowfall, first pet, first anything that mattered.
- Show us how you felt — excited, embarrassed, afraid, proud, uncertain.
- Include at least one variation of one of these words:
- Early (earlier, earliest)
- Begin (beginning, began, begun, begins)
- Primary (primarily, primaries)
- Start (start, started, starting, starts)
Let the repetition do some of the emotional work; and have fun with the echo!

so nice Christine, a beautiful poem! 💜💜
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hi, Christine❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Nancy, is now live until Monday, Mar. 16:
Much love,
David
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Christine, this feels reflective to me. The closing turn—“Ready to begin anew, no longer blue”—especially stands out to me!
~David
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Yes, I’m looking forward to my new life….coming soon.
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*hug*
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Just accepted a new job! I got three different offers! I’m pretty proud of myself after not being in a classroom for eight years!
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MAZAL TOV!
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Just lovely!
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A heartfelt poem of heartbreak. May the blues stay at bay.
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Well, they may actually be shifting away! 🤞🏼
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You did a wonderful job with this form, Christine. And I am right there with you- solo- single- free- whatever you want to call it going on 25 years now- and ever so contented!
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When I lost my first husband I swore I would live my life for me. I didn’t…Seven years now, almost eight, not all regret but I am happy to be back to just being able to be me.
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you added a story element to the poem, well-done, Christine. This was a fun prompt.
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Once I got the idea I did have some fun with it. Thanks for reading and commenting
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You’re welcome.
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Beautiful poem, Cristine. Moving though.
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Real life is moving, no? 😊
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This is such a poignant poem, Christian; a very moving story. Well done.
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Thanks Nancy. Written from my heart
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Christine, this is a lovely poem!! Bravo!
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Thank you!!
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Beautifully poem. So moving
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Thank you
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You’re welcome
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Christine, I love how you told the story in your poem! I especially like when you say, ‘life moved on, a new way to begin, a win’. It feels very hopeful. 🥰👏
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I’m trying to stay positive
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