
Quietly Hidden
Quiet
Breathe in
And take a moment
To hold it then
Release it slowly
Reigning in the emotions
That implore
Complicity
Giving in to tears
That forge through
Memories and regrets
Hidden©2025 CBialczak
Jaideep’s prompt guidelines
- Write a poem that starts and ends in silence.
- The first and last lines should directly evoke or describe silence.
- It could be the literal word silence, or imagery that suggests quietness, stillness, or absence of sound.
- The point is to frame the whole poem between two moments of silence.
- Use enjambment to sound like a heartbeat.
- Enjambment means carrying a sentence or phrase over from one line to the next without a pause.
- The short, broken flow can mimic a heartbeat: steady, pulsing, slightly uneven.
- Think of each line as a “beat” that pushes into the next one.
- Keep it to 12 lines, like 12 heartbeats.
- The entire poem is only 12 lines long.
- Each line equals one “pulse,” so the poem itself becomes a heartbeat sequence.
- The brevity forces intensity and rhythm.
- At least once, use a one-word line that makes the reader pause.
- Somewhere in the poem, have a line with only one word.
- This acts like a pause or a sudden strong beat in the rhythm, making the reader stop and notice.
- That single word should carry weight—emotionally, visually, or sonically.

hi, Christine❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Michelle, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/10/01/w3-prompt-179-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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Thanks for the reminder!
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Beautifully done!
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Christine the slow breath is so emotionally powerful! Bravo!
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Thank you
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Beautiful and emotional poem, Christine!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks for reading Yvette!
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Christine, the way you build from “Quiet / Breathe in” to those hidden tears really moves me—feels like a whole journey contained in a breath.
~David
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Thank you David
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oh wow. Splendid
I love the pauses. Thanks for sharing.
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Ahhh….just what I needed too.
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Breath holds so much of our emotional interaction with the world. Beautifully expressed. (K)
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stop
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I apologize! That was meant for my alarm, not you! Lol! Thank you for your response and for reading!
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I say that to my alarm too.
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It moves like heartbeat. Well done, Christine.
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Very good take. I like the heartbeat line …
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Thank you
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Nicely done my friend
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Thank you
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You’re welcome ☺️
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