
Jaideep’s prompt guidelines
This week, we’re playing with contrast:
Write a poem where form and content are at odds.
- Use a light or playful form (for example, a limerick, clerihew, double dactyl, skeltonic, or nursery-rhyme rhythm).
- Or simply write in any style that sounds upbeat through its meter, rhyme, sing-song cadence, or playful repetition.
- Then employ that cheerful sound to convey weighty subject matter — loss, mortality, injustice, or other serious themes.
The tension between the bright form and dark content should create an unsettling or thought-provoking effect.
Extra twist (optional): Work the word echo into your poem.
Missing You
The sound of your voice, an echo to me
Reminds me of how it used to be
With all of our lives laid out ahead
I’d never imagine you would be dead.
I miss you forever, I miss you right now
Its hard to live without you, I don’t know how
Our old life is gone, its not coming back
Now I’m stuck alone to pick up the slack.
©2025 CBialczak

hi, Christine 🥰
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Lisa Paul, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/09/17/w3-prompt-177-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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Thank you! We are in the process of moving so I’m at the new house. David will get here late tonight so I definitely have the time to delve into my writing!
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‘I miss you forever, I miss you right now’ expresses the raw immediacy of loss in a way that feels both timeless and urgent. Wonderful!
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Thank you.
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Christine, the rhyme feels light, but “I miss you forever, I miss you right now” cuts deep.
~David
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Yes, I know, unfortunately
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You nailed the prompt and set up a poignant contrast- with almost a well now you’ve gone and done it tone.
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I had to go back and reread it but I see what you mean
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So well done, powerfully felt contrast …💞
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Bravo! This maintained the lilting rhythm yet a very serious topic!
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I felt a little bad writing it!
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I can understand why. 💙
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You’ve managed a difficult prompt so well. Very poignant poem. 🌹
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Thank you
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Christine, isn’t it odd putting such sad thoughts to a ‘happy’ rhythm – you did it so well 🙌
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Yes, I felt sort of bad writing it!
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Don’t feel bad it was what was asked
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A very poignant poem Christine.
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Thank you Sadje
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You’re most welcome my friend
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Seems so conflicted with the sing-song melody. Nicely done.
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This is written so well. That fourth line is like a punch to the gut. It is so true “our old life is gone”.
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Yeah, it felt sort of bad writing it so flippantly!
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