
Ode to My Mother
There was a long time ago that I knew
A woman who loved me no matter what
Losing her left us so broken and blue
But some doors were opened when this one shut
Memories last and traditions are held
Ideas are shared in so many ways
All things that I learned has left my heart swelled
I keep up her beauty all of my days
©2024 CBialczak
Rispetto #1: Poem comprised of two quatrains written in iambic (unstress, stress) tetrameter (four feet–or, in this case, 8 syllables).
Rispetto #2: Poem (or song) comprised of 8 hendecasyllabic (11-syllable) lines–usually one stanza.
Both versions appear to follow this rhyme scheme: ababccdd (though I also found a mention of an abababcc pattern). Plus, I found more than a few sources which claim rispettos were originally written to pay “respect” to a woman.

This is gorgeous Christine! ❤ ❤
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Thank you
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Your mother was a beauty!! I like this form and especially your interpretation! I might have to give it a try!
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This wasn’t one of the worst Lol.
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Nice take, thanks.
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