
Jamb-Jitsu?
- Two stanzas (S1 and S2) with three rules:
- S1 must have more lines than S2;
- ALL lines of S1 must employ enjambment;
- Enjambment is: the running-over of a sentence or phrase from one poetic line to the next, without terminal punctuation;
- ALL lines of S2 must have the same number of syllables
What I Wish
With all the dreams and desires I possess I wish I had
the space to work without constraints so that I could
make anything I wanted whenever I wanted with no problem
regarding space or materials and with all this space I had
enough time to work whenever I wanted to build whatever I want
Following my dreams
My mind’s a blueprint
Creating something
That will amaze me
©2024 CBialczak

Fantastic Christine! ❤
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Thank you!
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I know the feeling! So well expressed, Christine. 👏
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Your creations are amazing.
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Aw, thank you!
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You’re most welcome
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Christine, your poem’s evocative language conveys a yearning to follow dreams and bring them to life… This is such a a resonant and imaginative piece.
~David
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thank you!
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Christine,
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the delightful Aishwarya Kannan, is now live:
Enjoy! 🥳
Much love,
David
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Thank you
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🤗
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Bravo! I really like this one! You made the Jamb-Jitsu look easy!
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hahaha! its all an illusion 🤪
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Clever Christine
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Love it
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