
Lorraine’s prompt guidelines
- Form (required): Villanelle;
- Theme (suggested): The cycle of life & death
Being True
Be true to yourself each day
Live only your best life now
True honesty and love this way
No matter what you might say
Just smile and take a bow
Be true to yourself each day
Accept it all that may
Don’t worry or have a cow
True honesty and love this way
Encompass the sun and each ray
Like a piglet suckling a sow
Be true to yourself each day
If necessary you can pray
Through the snow and the ice just plow
True honesty and love this way
Build your life’s work like clay
Loving all you allow
Be true to yourself each day
True honesty and love this way
©2023 CBialczak
A villanelle is a nineteen-line poetic form consisting of five tercets followed by a quatrain. There are two refrains and two repeating rhymes, with the first and third lines of the first tercet repeated alternately at the end of each subsequent stanza until the last stanza, which includes both repeated lines:
- Rhyme scheme: AbA’ abA abA’ abA abA’ abAA’;
- The 1st line (A) and 3rd line (A’), which are the refrains, are repeated four times each;
- A appears at the end of stanzas 2 and 4 and as the second-to-last line in stanza 6;
- A’ appears again at the end of stanzas 3, 5, and 6.
- The 1st line (A) and 3rd line (A’), which are the refrains, are repeated four times each;

A villanelle with a very special message. Nice one! 💗
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Being true to yourself is the most important thing in life in my opinion. Your poem brings this out powerfully.
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And repeat this poem to yourself every day. A good recipe to follow.
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good idea!
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Build your life’s work like clay
Loving all you allow… — positive Mindset all through this one. Loved it Christine. 💜🙏
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Wonderful rhyme selection and I enjoyed this one!! ❤
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Christine,
Your villanelle is like a refreshing breeze of positivity! The way you advocate for authenticity and love shines through each line. It’s a beautiful reminder to stay true to ourselves and embrace life with honesty. I love the uplifting vibes in your verses.
~David
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Hi, Christine!
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Lesley Scoble, is now live:
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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I’m very late on this since being away with my daughter but I may go ahead with it anyhow….after catching up on everything else!
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Christine, hi! 👋🏻
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the delightful Aboli Mane, is now live!
Enjoy!
Much love 💖
David
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Thank you for this wonderful reminder!
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Excellent poem and a beautiful message
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Thank you
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You’re welcome ☺️
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A beautiful villanelle! Well done! ❤
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Thank you
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