
Tis the Season
With the holidays coming I know
that how far or wherever I go
The tough times are true but I’ll make it through
Though my heart may sink to a new low
©2023 CBialczak
The gwawdodyn is a Welsh poetic form with a couple variations. However, both versions are comprised of quatrains (4-line stanzas) that have a 9/9/10/9 syllable pattern and matching end rhymes on lines 1, 2, and 4. The variations are made in that third line:
- One version has an internal rhyme within the third line. So there’s a rhyme somewhere within the third line with the end rhyme on the third line.
- The other version has an internal rhyme within the third line that rhymes with an internal rhyme in the fourth line.
In both cases, the rhyme starts somewhere in the middle of the third line and it is a unique rhyme to the end rhyme in lines 1, 2, and 4.

This reminds me of a limerick.
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You know, now that you say so, it pretty much is a limerick except the two lines (3 and 4) have been combined. Good eye!
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Or ear. I picked up on it in the way it sounds.😉
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I have a very difficult time with internal rhyme… not that I can’t do it but I do eschew it!
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I actually had to just write the poem and then figure that part out after. It is tricky.
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