
Write a rondeau inspired by a childhood memory.
My World
Little dollies in a circle of some magic place
Toys lined up so properly, each in its own small space
Pack it up when I am done, no need to leave a mess
For there are other things to do, a shelf-full more or less
Each item spreading joy to me, a smile on my face
Its okay if I take my time this is no running race
A positively happy world, of solitude and grace
Playing by myself a lot is okay I confess
I know that I am loved
Making blankets and small clothes with fabric lined with lace
Taking time to stitch with care, a mess would leave a trace
Mom is happy to provide the pattern for a dress
If she would make it honestly it’d be a lot less stress
This could take longer than it should if stuck with my slow pace
I know that I am loved
©2023 CBialczak

A beautiful poetic recall.
(I relate to this poem as I made small clothes too—and lined my dolls up in their own small space) 💗
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So much warmth in your words. The imaginary worlds we create as children remain with us always. (K)
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I wish I had spent my childhood time doing/learning something useful. To this day I can’t sew a button back on a blouse. I love safety pins. 😉
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Funny because there are things that I just took as normal but realize weren’t the norm for everyone
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To me this triggers memories.
My mother was extremely neat and clean and tidy. It interfered with my play, and I never felt I lived up to her expectations.
And then there is your refrain: ¨I know that I am loved¨.
Glad to read that!
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I think if you were to hear the truth you exceeded her expectations
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This is beyond sweet, Christine ❤ ! Thank you for sharing 🙂
Much love,
David
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Hi, Christine ❤
Just wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by the wonderful and creative Michelle Navajas, is now live:
Enjoy!
~David
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Thank you!
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This has such a warm feeling Christine, lovely ❤️
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What a lovely, gentle, memory 🙂
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Nice!
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This is a beautiful childhood memory 💜💜
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