This week’s poet is
Lesley’s prompt guideline
- Compose a free verse poem of any length (but consider that I am a slow reader; save the tomes for next time);
- Thematic: The theme for this poem should be ~ “the SUN”
Oh, Sun!
Oh, heat of the earth,
light of the day,
maker of food and life
in summer we find you offensive
we hide from you
we provide others shelter from you
we avoid you and your rays
in winter we find you complimentary
we seek you out
we want to share your presence
we look up to you and feel your warmth
on our skin
Can you not find the perfect middle?
Can you not move farther back when you are
so hot and closer when it is cold?
Sun, I worship your light
I harness your power
I fear your wrath
but of nothing else
I respect your unending beauty.
©2023 CBialczak

Oh, heat of the earth,
light of the day,
Lovely opening lines. 💛
Your poem is almost a rebuke to a Goldilocks sun, Christine.
It’s a wonderful response to the prompt. Thank you 🙏 ☀️😊
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Thank you!
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Oh yes, the contrast from winter and summer, but we appreciate it so much more – maybe, I love your poem ….
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Thank you
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Respect is exactly the right feeling. (K)
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Yes! I was also thinking about this contrast inherent in our relationship to the sun…
This is so gorgeously rendered, Christine!
❤
David
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Thank you! 🙏🏻
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Hi, Christine 👋🏻
This week’s W3 is hosted by l’il ol’ me – I hope you enjoy it:
Much love,
David
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Christine,
This week’s W3, hosted by the delightful Suzanne Brace, is now live!
Enjoy 🙂
Much love,
David
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Thank you for the reminder. I hope you are all still doing okay. I am still hoping for peace!
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Thanks, Christine! We’re okay – I just wrote a blog post with an extended update about how we’re doing 🙂
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I’ll check it out.
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Are you all okay? I pray they find an end to this madness soon!
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We have to take the sun with all the pros and cons. Nicely done
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yes, it is easy to complain when its too hot and when its too rainy and…..lol
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Yes that’s so true.
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I love your ode to the sun 🙂
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Thank you
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