Write a sonnet or any other 14-line poem about “The concept of time and how it affects our lives.”
Getting things done
Above me I hear the birds and the bees
Working so busy I’m just left alone
Wind blows the branches the leaves and the trees
Chilling my body right down to the bone
I think of the list of all there’s to do
Lucky that time seems to be on my side
Slowly I move until completions ensue
My thoughts going on a memory ride
The list never ends, the jobs are still there
My body telling me its time to stop
Closing my eyes I can suck in some air
Hopes that energy will not let me drop
But nothing gets done, the day is complete
How can I say that I conquered a feat?
©2023 CBialczak
Stine Writing 
Just existing is a feat! Don’t feel guilty about getting off the ride occasionally to reminisce.
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Yes I feel it – some days it feels like we are just treading water 🙌
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Ha, this is the story of my life, Christine, and you captured it so perfectly! Amazing.
~David
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Ah, we have more in common than we thought! Lol!
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💘 Christine 💘
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Christine ~
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 is now live:
And it’s hosted by the wonderful Murisopsis ❤
Enjoy!
David
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I’m telling you…if I didn’t see this message I don’t know if I would ever remember today was the day….I would remember a few days later when I feel like I forgot to do something! Lol
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Some days turn out like this
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Awesome poem Christine! I have days like that, too! Xx
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Wow! Rеading your poеm fееls likе listеning to a musical composition playеd bеautifully on a piano kеyboard. Each linе pеrfеctly capturеs thе rhythmic pulsе of lifе’s ups and downs. It makеs mе rеalizе how thе strеssеs of daily obligations can somеtimеs drown out thе harmony of innеr pеacе and balancе nееdеd to thrivе. Thank you for sharing thеsе еnchantingly composеd musings that invitе mе to hit pausе and rеflеct on staying truе to mysеlf amidst all thе noisе and chaos. 👌👍👏😊
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Thank you for such beautiful feedback
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