Written for M at puttingmyfeetinthedirt: https://puttingmyfeetinthedirt.com/2020/08/01/august-writing-prompts-3/#comments
My Monsters
When I’m home all alone And nobody’s around I jump at the thought The sight and the sound Of shadows that wander Alone in my house Watching me live Almost like my own spouse They hide in the corners And under the bed I try not to see them But they’re right in my head. I tell them to go home That my house is my own They even watch me When I’m on the phone. I have no idea Where these monsters come from All that I know Is that they think that I’m dumb. | They snicker and laugh And tinker around They think they are quiet But I hear every sound I wish they would leave So that I’d get some sleep They’re ruining the days And the company I keep. No one believes That these monsters are here But I swear on my grave They stay very near. If they will not leave Then I may just give in I’m not sure if they’d hurt My delicate skin. For now I am here And I see them hiding but maybe that’s just me Imagining the whole thing. |
©2020 CBialczak Poetry
Very cleverly written and a fun read!
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
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Hi there Stine. I just featured this post on my weekly feature, The Saturday Symphony
https://wordeologist.wordpress.com/2020/08/22/the-saturday-symphony-7/
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Thank you for that!
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My pleasure entirely
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[…] Shadow monsters by Stine Writing – A unique structure you can read every which way and still harvest different meanings each time. […]
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Amazing 🌼
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Thank you
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Brilliant! I love your clever use of words. Well done!
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Thank you John
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This is so cool you can alternate read or finish one line and do the other. It’s amazing.
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Just a happy coincidence!
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A mind-blowing one
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I was going to ask that too, which way it was meant to be read, but I think the ambiguity is part of it…
…Unlike the ambiguity in this, which is just hilarious and messed-up at the same time: https://img-9gag-fun.9cache.com/photo/aE2M2QM_460s.jpg
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definitely catches you by surprise
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Very nicely done! I read it top to bottom and then side to side! It works both ways! Bravo!
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Just fun
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