
Written for bikurgurl: https://bikurgurl.com/2020/08/12/100-word-wednesday-161/
Afternoon Walk
What George and Lester hadn’t known was that the storm coming over the mountains was going to be bad. If they had known they wouldn’t have been on the bridge at that hour. Maybe someone would have told the two men to stay home; play a game of chess, have an afternoon cocktail. Maybe the winds would not have pulled off Lester’s cap or taken George’s newspaper right out of his hands. Maybe George and Lester would be home laughing about the old days, the broads they knew, the hearts they broke, the battles they won. Someone should’ve told them.
©2020 CBialczak Fiction
I love this looking back on things that might have been – truly a longing in your words 🖤 Thank you for joining us again this week 🖤
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the life changes in a split of a second! i like these 100 words stories, i used to write them. is it your challenge?
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No, I host the Simply 6 Minutes challenge.
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Oh, I haven’t heard about this one! I must check it out!
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Once when I was walking over a bridge a gust of wind blew off a ballcap I was wearing and deposited it into the river below. I felt bad because it wasn’t my cap.
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Stuff like that sucks.
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Nice story. I hope they stay safe. 🙂
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Love this!
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Concise and interesting!
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